Saturday 2 April 2016

final draft

final draft

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WILL ATTACH A PAPER THAT WAS DONE BY THE WEBSITE AND I WANT YOU TO EDIT THE FOLLOWING :
- intro should include an outline of the case study

- structure of the case study- problem/solution paragraph missing. whats the one on expertise? ( a problem they faced and a solution )

-application of analysis is far too short. ONE full paragraph fort each section and min 2 ideas per section. don't forget topic sentence

- logical recommendations: explain some ideas a bit more

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